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Name DeadGuyKai 15/01/24(Sat)19:48 No.25111   [Reply]


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Name Anonymous 15/01/21(Wed)21:06 No.25079   [Reply]
what do you think?
>> Name Rei Fan Nr.:7.100.733.493 15/01/22(Thu)09:01 No.25084  
I almost gave it up giving critiques on the net,'cause most people don't understand the difference between a critique on their artworks and a personal insult.

Compared to your other works one can see a constant improvement. Especially the hair and eyes are very nicely drawn, the colors here are really good too. Colors and shadings are something on which I think you are already quite good at. But Rei's schoolgirl skirt look totally off, you could have done better here. A piece of cloth doesn't behave stiff as an umbrella. Also your brown color on shoes and the bag is a bit too dark compared to the luminanve of the image. And I think it would look better if the direction of the strand of the hair would go on the other side. But I don't know if this was intended because Rei is turning the head suddenly to the viewer or wind is comming from the back.
Hope that helps!
>> Name Anonymous 15/01/22(Thu)13:31 No.25085  
same as above.

shape of chin also needs a bit of improvement but in general you keep getting better. the arms and legs are not as jarring as previous artworks of yours. (although improvement of the hands is still needed)

Keep at it. work better in drawing the motion of the uniform.
>> Name Anonymous 15/01/22(Thu)21:28 No.25087  
Thanks, i do like criicue as long as it isn't actualy a personal insult. I know that the way to great and impressive works is quite long and the criticue is supposed to show me the way to improvement.

as for umbrella skirt I tried to give it a powerful dynamic feeling, I started to draw a figure throwing a discus and it turned into Ayanami throwin her bag.
I kind of tried to give her very powerful rotational motion, like she's about to fuck some angels up with this bag of hers.
I guess i didn't actually make her pose look right so people say that skirt is weird.
>> Name Rei Fan Nr.:7.100.733.493 15/01/23(Fri)11:39 No.25095  
Ok, than it's clear now with ther hair and everything. I guess that hasn't anything to do with your pose drawing, I just didn't think on a rotation movement. Still a few folds on the skirt wouldn't be wrong here.For example, if you draw in some curves lines on the skirt, it might help to see your intention of a rotation.


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